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Orpheus, Eurydice, Hermes by Rainer Maria Rilke (trans. Stephen Mitchell)

  • Writer: Ben Askins
    Ben Askins
  • 5 days ago
  • 3 min read


Intro: The Myth of Orpheus and Eurydice


In the ancient Greek myth, Orpheus is the poet-musician whose song could move trees and stones—and, more famously, the gods of the Underworld. When his beloved wife Eurydice dies from a snake bite, Orpheus descends into Hades to retrieve her. Moved by his music, Hades and Persephone allow Eurydice to follow Orpheus back to the land of the living—on one condition: he must not look back at her until they’ve both reached the surface.


But Orpheus, torn between trust and terror, glances back just before they cross the threshold. In that instant, Eurydice vanishes, reclaimed by death forever.


It’s a story of love, loss, and the unbearable weight of doubt. Of art’s power—and its limits. Of how the past is a ghost that can’t follow you into the light.


Rilke’s Orpheus. Eurydice. Hermes. isn’t just a retelling. It’s a cosmic MRI. A dark love sonogram. And Doc wouldn’t waste your time trying to paint a prettier picture than the one Rilke already carved in blood and ash. No, what Rilke offers is the real-time autopsy of myth’s rotting heart—and your own. So let’s get surgical.


The Setup: Orpheus is walking forward, Eurydice behind him, Hermes behind her, ascending from death. He’s got his eye on the finish line but can’t look back. That’s the rule. The catch. The razor hidden in the apple. Don’t look back or she’s gone. And like all good myths, that rule is just code for: “Your salvation costs your certainty.”


But what the poem shows—what Doc sees clear as a ghost’s grin—is that Orpheus isn’t just risking Eurydice. He’s walking ahead without her. He’s already lost her. She’s no longer the woman in his poems. She’s no longer “his.” She’s dissolving into death like sugar in black tea. The poem says it outright—she’s not thinking of him. She’s full of her death. Closed. Virgin again. Not in purity but in emptiness. In non-identity.


That’s the twist of the blade. The tragedy isn’t that he turns and loses her. It’s that he never had her to begin with. She was already gone. He was following a shadow. A projection. A memory so thick it got legs and walked behind him. And when he turns? He sees not loss, but the proof of absence. She asks, “Who?” Like she never knew him. Like she’s asking the god, not mourning the lover. That’s when the gods know the play is over.


Here’s the punchline: This isn’t just Orpheus’s story. This is what you do every time you chase your past. Your lost love. Your old identity. Your dead self. You walk forward with hope and backward with eyes. You think you’re reclaiming something, but the moment you see it clearly, it’s gone. Or worse—it was never yours.


That’s Rilke’s dagger through the ribs: The one you loved never made it out. The one you followed wasn’t real. And you? You’re not a hero. You’re just the echo of your own dirge.


And so it ends not with a cry, but a question left unanswered. A backward glance. A soft “Who?” whispered through the veil. No thunder, no wrath of gods—only the weightless undoing of hope. Orpheus walks forward into absence. Eurydice drifts backward into root and rain. And Hermes, silent witness, turns once more into the waiting dark.


So what now? Burn the lyre. Mourn the illusion. But only for as long as necessary. And for god’s sake, stop looking back. The dead don’t follow you. They just pull you down.

 
 
 

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